Please check out this aviation video clip! would love some f

[royden]

Howzit everyone. A friend of mine has been playing around with video editing software and put his first aviation video clip together. Check it out on the link and give us a little feedback.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WFqtKKFZy_g

[John.com]

Hey Royden,

It would have been easier if you told viewers what you were trying to achieve with the video, either insofar as content or technique/effects goes.

To be frank I found the content very disjointed (no theme, just very varied clips all put together, from heavies to paragliders) as well as nothing really new insofar as the video editing techniques goes.

I would be happy to give somewhat more constructive feedback if you let us know what you were trying to achieve.

All the best, John